Editing rough cut feedback

After Rebecca looked at our blog she gave us some feedback.

• She told us to tighten up our clips, getting rid of parts that are not needed. 
• The shot with Solomon coming outside of the bridge needs to be longer.
• Make the clip of the bench plaque shorter.
• Move our tunnel short to a more suitable place.
• With the spinning shot of Solomon on the bench, we have to make jumo cuts and change the direction so it reverses.

Overall our rough cut doesn't have sound yet and at the beginning we still need to include our production company logo's.